Hey all,
I am going to try something I have been wanting to do for awhile. I am going to write a historical fiction story of sorts on the pages of my blog and you the reader will get to watch as it unfolds.
I have a rough story line that I will develop as I write but this is basically going to be improvisational writing. Its a risky endeavor and it may be a train wreck I dont know.......
Each new part of the story will be written more or less on the spot. I worked a bit on this first part ahead of time getting my thoughts together and developing the story line but from here on out I will basicaslly write each part fully off the top of my head as I go.
We will see how it goes and I am going to go where it takes me.
The story is based in the State of Jefferson in the late 1950's. This story will follow the life of a young boy as he grows up along the coastal rivers in the redwood wilds and how he meets a reclusive old man who is flyfishing legend.............
Part 1
Anadromous-The Journey Begins
The clock on the wall moved so slowly. The second hand
struggled to spin and I swear the minute hand hadn’t moved in 10 minutes. Will
this day ever end? The droning voice of the teacher sounded like the parents in
the old Peanut cartoons, Waa Waaa Wawaawawa .
Nervously fidgeting with a mechanical pencil, I looked down
at my well-worn sneakers and they instantly took me back to the many places
they had traveled. Johnson Creek fishing for brook trout, deer hunting with Uncle
Merle out on the pine flat behind the old mill, pheasant hunting along the
ditch line down in Doolittle Gulch. The many hours of baseball with the gang at
the schoolyard ball field, had also taken their toll. I think I was sliding into second base with them when they
were just two days old. I remember Mom was furious with me as she watched me
take them off on the front porch, the red clay mud of the base path falling off
them as they hit the worn boards at the top of the steps. I saw the rip in the
heel where the barb wire fence caught it as I slipped through the wire running
to escape the bull in Mr. Freedman’s field. That part of the creek next to his
field always had the biggest fish………..
RINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!! The bell signaling the end of
class shocked me out of my daydream and I grabbed my backpack and ran for the
door.
The teacher grabbed my arm before I could escape the room and
said “Maybe you could pay attention a little more tomorrow, you are
usually so attentive, and don’t forget the test!”
“Yes Mr. Cooper” I stammered as I walked out the door.
I couldn’t wait to get on my bike and head home. Well, I say
home but I wander a lot. After school was always a time of exploration and
today was no different. These rides home often took till dark and then I had to
endure the wrath of my mother for being late for my chore work.
Today, I took the usual long way home heading straight for
the creek to see if the salmon had made it up this high yet. The air was cooling and the seasons
were changing, it should be about time I thought as I pedaled madly away from the
school.
It was late October and I had seen the fish on good water
years up here by now. This year was a pretty good water year and the creek was flowing at a moderate level. There were some deeper pools that might hold a fish but they would
be still be exposed coming over the gravel bars to reach them. A short rain storm
earlier in the day had raised the water slightly and was now carrying old and
new fallen leaves downstream.
I laid my bike down on the grass and walked the trail
downstream towards the Big River still some 20 miles away, searching for signs
of the big fall Chinook. I surprised a great blue heron that was fishing the
shallow pools and it jumped up in front of me nearly scaring me senseless with
its loud squawk and screech. As the squawking faded into the distance, I heard
the telltale splash of a fish in shallow water. As I approached the corner
riffle a saw it. A 30lb male Chinook, nickel bright and fresh from the ocean
fining in water that did not fully cover it. As I approached it, the fish moved
slowly into the deeper water under the alders on the far bank. The broad tail
of the fish pushed water like a paddle as it moved, then the whole fish disappeared
into the lightly tea colored depths.
I sit in amazement and wonder where the fish has been, and
how old it was. Where did it go on its ocean voyage? More importantly how can I
catch one? I had grown up fishing for trout but had never gone after salmon. I
had heard the old timers talk at the local diner about catching these fish in
the Big River but no one could ever take me.
Ever since the accident when Dad died, I have had to do most
things on my own. I have always been a loner and no one really understood me
like he did. Mom is great and loves me dearly; she just doesn’t have the time
to take me down to the Big River. She has been working two jobs and sometimes
three to support my sisters and me. She is always so tired……..
I sat and watched the pool for a few more minutes. Then three
other small fish come into the tiny run. They didn’t look like salmon but were
quite bright and appeared to be about 8-10 lbs. Maybe these were the ocean
going rainbows the old timers talked about, steelhead I think they called them.
They say that these steelhead come into the creek in the fall just like the
salmon, usually after a little bit of rain. I watched one of these smaller fish hold, suspended off the
bottom under an old cedar stump that had become exposed on the far bank. The
fading sun pierced through a hole in the ferns and lit the fish up in a surreal
display, highlighting the dorsal and adipose fins of what I would later learn
was a wild costal steelhead. I admired its long sleek and powerful body, its
mouth slowly opening and closing.
Then with a flick of the tail it was gone, through the next
riffle and into the next pool. I watched the undercurrent ripple to the shore
and splash lightly on the gravel. The pool calmed again and I continued to walk
down the creek for another hour, not seeing another fish.
It was getting late and I knew I would have to go back and
find my bike. The creek bottom was growing dark as the alder, fir and cedars overhanging
the creek were blocking the last rays of sun out of the west. I hurried back to
my bike and got on it and flew towards home. Mom’s going to kill me I thought,
I have 2 hours of chores to do and maybe an hour to do it in, that is if I make
it home quick.
If I cut through the field behind the church I could save
some time but the Old Man might be there feeding the horses. Billy Talbot said the
Old Man shot rock salt at him the last time he tried to cut through there. The
Old Man doesn’t like trespassers………
Excellent, more please. I really like this.
Thanks Robert!
This is exactly what I needed, thanks for sharing!